Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Trees Comments

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My eyes are upon the trees.

For, trees do not live in fragments.
Till they fall, they stand
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Suman Pokhrel
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A B Faniki 09 August 2019

A creative rendition of a beautiful mind n imagination. Thanks for sharing your poetic observation

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Matt Mooney 25 September 2009

That is a brilliant poem-one I would like to remember for myself for it's full of beauty and meaning for me. I have never thought of trees in that way and I have thought of them alot. I am surrounded by trees. I love the way also you have mirrored the peace and stability of the tree by squatting down and being like the tree for a moment. In God's creation everything has a meaning.10.

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Rup Pokharel 29 August 2009

wow! ! 'Ah! They are erect without cares Those evergreen temples, Across the landscape Of my eyes.' True salute to nature.10++

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Biratnagar, Nepal
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