Trees Comments
Time begins upon a wind, a journey of the first, to find the ground, come whistling down, to quench a hungry thirst.
The skies are bright, nights are light & time is racing through, slow pressure down into the ground, a passage welcome too.
The heavy earth comes raining down to put me in my place, I'm sinking down to find my crown & start a brand new phase.
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Excellent write John...beautiful imagery you have here...thank you 10++
I love (indigenous) trees, and was delighted to find this one. I found your multiple internal rhymes in your very long lines interesting and effective.
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Write comment. Such a beautiful start, Jon. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks