Friday, April 18, 2014

Tree Of Dreams! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its so painful
To see the seed of dreams you sowed
Drained away to nil today.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Dinesan Madathil 26 April 2014

Every tree was a sapling once and still earlier a seed! The tree of dreams can have re surging future as when we dream we do not have any barriers. The tree here is watered with elixir and is fenced by eternity of the kind.

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Yash Shinde 21 April 2014

.......the tree might be dead, but your imagination can bring it back to life........... .........a deep write with a lovely message...... .........Life is empty and purposeless, without having dreams to fulfill....... Do read my poems if u get time..........

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Valsa George 20 April 2014

If the tree of dreams is properly watered and carefully tended, it can still sprout once again Geetha! Never give up hope... Soon you 'ii be able to exult at the sight of new leaves on the tree! Enjoyed!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 April 2014

Tree of dreams once sown proving fruitless.........Geetha..........once again a very well composed piece that touches the heart...............

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Lyn Paul 20 April 2014

This Tree Of Dreams may now be lifeless but we must plant our dreams and hopes into new life. Beautiful words Geetha

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Salini Nair 20 April 2014

nice poem...like it...............Its so painful To see the seed of dreams you sowed Drained away to nil today.

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Unwritten Soul 19 April 2014

What you sown today we harvest in future, if care and love watered everyday..._Soul

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Rubab Atwal 18 April 2014

an amazing poem...........it does feel bad when a dream shatters.......loved reading every line

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Geetha Jayakumar

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