I come near to you, lonley, with my shadow
To hear the music of your rippling
That, gently, kissing at the brink of my medow
Where I stand like a sappling
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'I come near to you, lonley, with my shadow To hear the music of your rippling' Dear chum, in this poem despair of loved one is drafted brilliantly by the poet. Whatever is the poem, Vipins your poems are highlighting because I think you add some heaven sent spice of the nature - Nature is always delighting - sometimes i do color my poems by one stanza on nature though may love or lonely I only feel single nature. Amazing write - Heat touching one - THUMBS UP! 10+++++++++++
The idea of the feeding stream under the roots of the tree is a great one. You are really an artist, expressing great feelings through great images. Your love for nature is tightly woven into intense emotions. A big WOW, for this exquisite poem.
Trees are my friend. We have to learn a lot from the trees. it is one step ahead in maintaining natural harmony.
Oh, Vipins, this is beautiful! Telling your beloved that you want to grow as strong as a tree in her love. Offering her protection when things get rough. Caressing her and cherishing her. By the way, what tree would you be?
Very nice; I truly enjoyed this one.