Rooted in soil
I reach to pull the clouds
After many years I may reach
In luck I may be nearer
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i really do not see anything wrong with this. this poem is relative to many people in a lot of ways. really i would say well done than to criticize on this piece. so, well done to you and be happy about this, i mean it, Sarah-Louise
Nice.....souds much like the way I was when I was a tree. Trees are very interesting. People look at a tree and see green leaves, but I see greens of many shades, no leaf having the exact same green. Of course there is the tree of Knowledge, it is said the Christ was hung on a tree, hugging a tree can be therapy and much more. Your work was interesting and has current admirable qualities. Nice work. BG