Tree Comments

“How tragically wasted like the dull minds that mass” I think these are very fine words and I bet they’ll come popping into my mind every now and than when I see a crowd of such-and-such. Of course the thought has been expressed before, but never enough. And I like the way you did it besides.

your descriptions of tree is clear and the hidden messages in it was to acknowledge your writing as a whole. keep going pal.

Very good imagery here, particularly in the first two verses.You need to edit more as to choice of words. Be judicious. Suggest 'grasp my axe' and 'ponder thee'. Last line needs re-write somehow, it's anti-climactic and without real meaning.