She is a brilliant golden yellow tree with
Stiff competition to the Sun God, so powerful!
She challenges the Sun with her glowing attire, while the
Sun flutters his eyelids staring at his glowing competitor!
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She is like the fairy tale Princess Goldie-locks, So charming, so elegant, full of joyous cheers! O! So generously, she contributes her beauty, To the Stupendous world of glorious Nature! .....touching expression with nice diction. Beautiful poem on tree and nature is nicely executed. Thanks for sharing with attractive graphic.
Great imagery complemented well by a stunning graphic. Trees hold a strange fascination and if they are dressed in blossoms, their beauty is unrivaled. A befitting tribute to the glorious nature. A delightful read enriched by references to Sun God and Goldie-Locks.
Beautiful poem on the wonders of nature, the trees. How flowers bring colour to our life. How can we thank the trees! , because most other members of the fauna are not that lucky as we are, as they are colour-blind. Do they challenge the Sun-God? Of course they do, they do.. they are the only beings on earth who can.. and the lovely image accompanying the poem! ! ! ! ! Wonderful!
She challenges the Sun with her glowing attire, while the Sun flutters his eyelids staring at his glowing competitor! Shimmering yellow summer flowers! .... //.... The golden glow of Amaltas trees lined up on both sides of the roads here and there present an irresistible sight to people. Especially, a treat for the nature lovers during this part of the year. Thanks, Geeta ji, you have re-created the real magic of 'Shimmering yellow summer flowers! ' in your lovely poetic essay.
She stands proudly like a golden hillock with/Shimmering yellow summer flowers! Captivating poetic expression! A magnificent piece of poetry! Use of simile at places makes this poem endearing! Full marks!
Beautiful poem, beautiful tree- robust sense and power of yellow as being in competitive stretches for domination, by sun, by tree. Bold!
the tree the golden tree the see earthly beauty entertain heavenly the passerby and poetic meditation freely......// beautiful poem
She grows with million smiling blooms! ! ! ! ! ✒🙂🤗🌝 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.