Friday, November 7, 2008

Treat Every Moment As Your Last Comments

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Today I thought about my death
What would I say with my very last breath?
Who would be there to watch me pass on?
Who would pray for me when I had gone?
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Mary Murphy
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Homen Thangjam 18 November 2008

A yound lady grappling with the theme of death unsettles a bit. However, reading through, it turns out very charming. Nicely put. Breaking into a new paragraph from 'Make each moment count as....', would be structurally excellent. Excellent work.

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