Monday, December 15, 2014

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TREASURES HIDDEN
Carved out of the mountains in time where we lived came the chains of transformation
The hills of restoration and conservation became burial grounds for the first chapter.
Detained and destitute we watched the stars disappear in the eyes of our captors.
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Dimitrios Galanis 27 January 2016

You have nothing to prove.Try not to prove anything.Your poems will prove what through them want to prove.There is no need.That time you had to prove has past.

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Dimitrios Galanis 27 January 2016

Your metaphors are great, If you put them in an ordinary formal poem they will seem to EVERYONE gradiose.

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