Monday, June 1, 2009

Treasures Comments

Rating: 5.0

I heard a flock of seagulls in my car today
They sang you can run, but you cannot get away
I need more material in which to write
Creativity drawn from within my sight
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Deborah Cromer
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Eyan Desir 21 September 2009

Well written Deborah... 10s

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Nikunj Sharma 17 August 2009

this is love, affection, stimulation and purity, to dive deep into the subtleties of human behavious, realtionships, you come out with pearls........I often wonder.... this is a magnum opus of simplicity and love, to rate it or vote for, would be demeaning it.............I would just don my hat.........hey dont smile at my bald head..............

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Nikunj Sharma 02 July 2009

this is awe inspiring, what else can I say? I wish I could write like you in my next birth, some day.... U are too good.... read a poem of mine called BOOKMARK and EPITAPH..

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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