Friday, May 12, 2023

Treasured Memories Comments

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I adored being out on the immense, rushing sea, and I had myriad dreams,
Like slumbering, yellow days of summer, with its vibrant, gorgeous themes.

My dream was for a great sea adventure, when the blush was on the rose,
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S H 13 May 2023

Some memories are to cherish for ever, one such memory shared from your memory bank, liked the poem very much, thanks.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 May 2023

I enjoyed this Evelyn Bravo!

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Thank you very much for your kind thoughts, LeeAnn.

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M. Asim Nehal 13 May 2023

Cont...2 You compared the night and days while in sea and while on earth brining out a contrasting and vivid picture to the mind. Very admirable. With pen you created a complete picture and scenes of sea travel.

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Your kind response is so rewarding. Thank you so much for the pleasure of your lovely remarks.

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M. Asim Nehal 13 May 2023

Reading your poem is always a joy, about this poem: You mentioned about your dream to take a long journey through sea and everyone encouraged you....Cont 1

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