Saturday, March 13, 2010

Treasured First Time Comments

Rating: 4.7

I'll put on the box of memories
My first time to say 'I love you, Ma and Pa'
My first time to open my eyes in this world
My first time to cry breathlessly
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Tanner Geldart 11 April 2010

I like the poem and how it relates to pretty much everyone and their memories

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Auty Paul Jason 05 April 2010

This Poem is more than nice, we should read poems like this one.

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Emerald Eyes 23 March 2010

Wow! sheldon you realy amaze me every time i read your poems! ! :) :) im so jealous lol YOU ARE A GREAT POET :) 10

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Kranthi Pothineni 20 March 2010

Presented and expressed well. Reflective piece.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 18 March 2010

A finely presented experience of contemplative individual. The realistic and philosophic touch are endearing. Liked the expression much.

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Monica Sevilla 16 March 2010

a nice poem keep up! ! !

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Brenda Poole 16 March 2010

very nice! ! I like it, this poem can relate to most people.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 March 2010

Treasuring first time: memories, learning, successes, and overcomings until the daty the book is closed. A fresh look at the beginning, journey, and the completion of life.a 10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 15 March 2010

what a relaxing poem... just like reading it while at sea...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 March 2010

Beautiful poem, Sheldon. Feel treasured to read it. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Best Wishes.

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Eyan Desir 13 March 2010

Keep writting you will get better well express

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Whisperkwane Lamb 13 March 2010

like being in the womb an coming forth to the world you want and see everything...a new emotion...a new feeling..a new want...love is all and then some...but to know you feel this way...is a blessing..you are very much a poet in your own rite...and I agree you are a poet..no doubt...stay that way...open your eyes and heart to all...everything...your friend whisperkwane

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Lydia Wijnerman 13 March 2010

Whaw its very nice very powerfull words and from your heart. I feel honored to read your poems.

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