Wednesday, February 28, 2018

Treasure Chest Comments

Rating: ★5.0

When shall I open and see the  treasure
from the treasure chest I have found
The treasure which I haven't seen
And the key which I haven't received
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Rini Shibu
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Akhtar Jawad 02 March 2018

The poetess has finished the poem at a place from where the reader starts thinking why she hasn't seen the treasure, is she not sure that there are are pearls in the treasure chest? a great poem leving some thing for the readers.

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Rini. 02 March 2018

Thanks Akhtarji for visiting this poem..! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 March 2018

It's a wonderful poem Rini, Loved reading it! The last three lines are the epitome! Thanks for sharing...10

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Rini Shibu 01 March 2018

Thanks Dillip for visiting and posting your feedback..

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Nudershada Cabanes 01 March 2018

Beautiful poem of expectation and anticipation. Wonderfully penned.10

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Rini. 01 March 2018

Thanks Nuder for your remarks...! !

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Lamar Cole 28 February 2018

Great poem about treasure chest.

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Rini. 01 March 2018

Thanks Lamar for reading and commenting

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2018

To be opened! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini. 01 March 2018

Thanks Edward kofi for commenting..! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2018

Mind is anxious and curious. Emotion is treasured. Brilliant idea is expressed in this well composed poem. All should open eyes and see this treasure....10

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Rini. 01 March 2018

Thanks for your review kumarji..! ! !

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Lionsden 28 February 2018

The key will be your own, If you in Courage flown. Nicely written.

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Rini. 01 March 2018

Thanks for your great words.. Rini

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