Wednesday, February 6, 2008

Treasure Comments

Rating: 4.6

At the end of Heaven's rainbow,
There's a treasure that I've found.
Never gleaned from golden nuggets
Nor from diamonds underground.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
COMMENTS
Cristy Upshaw 08 June 2009

masterful piece, such beauty lies in your words and your heart.

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a valueless treasure that must be..lovely write...read my 'wealth'

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Danzen D. 20 November 2008

A great poem! Your words are nice and the feeling/s infused with poem are really expressed through them.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 October 2008

If the purpose of poetry is pure pleasure I found it here in ur poems. They immediately elevate my spirits; especially those tender touch poems like this.

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Love is the real treasure on earth and in heaven.wonderful poem.

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Chitra - 02 September 2008

nice thought there materialism is tranistory whereas treaures surreal in nature are a life long precious depository

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Misamurai Tanbo 26 August 2008

I thought this was a very pretty, beautiful poem. The images came to me smoothly.

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Osvaldo Roman 29 July 2008

I simply fell in love with this poem. Your words are truly beautiful and the picture you paint in my mind is truly vivid. Thank You for your words, which have made my day.

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Charlotte Sylvia 21 June 2008

Lovely poem. I really like how you paint pictures with the words you use.

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Lazarus Knix 11 June 2008

I loved the first and last stanza especially, amazing poem. Sweet and rhythmical

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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 March 2008

treasure when resourced by the rainbow love yet reasons to glean by the plume as when glimmered by the gleams divine heaven seems to bliss by the touch yet i feel the gloss of blossom paradise...............love when flows by the eloquence, superb write, i do admire by the muse,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 March 2008

its so fascinating...........like a beautiful painting........i liked every inches of it.........terrific pal, keep it up.

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poem whore 20 March 2008

thank you for writting this.

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Thad Wilk 18 February 2008

An eloquent and capturing write! A delight to read! ! *10*! ! ! Best regards: Friend Thad

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Patricia Gale 11 February 2008

Stunning, beautiful work..... what a love.

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Anita Atina 10 February 2008

This poem is a beautiful love song! Cheers, Anita

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This poem shows why I consider you one of the most consistent, skilled modern poets that I read. Well-done, beautiful to read.

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Meggie Gultiano 06 February 2008

yes, i agree. This is worth more than a ten..A wonderful write, and you really have the talent..I salute you!

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Michael Camacho 06 February 2008

Oh, so lovely, and really, really great, I loved this poem, you have a ten but you deserve more. but the way, thanks for your advice I will do it, and sorry for my english this is not my mother tongue, and I am learning this by my self. but thanks again for your advice and for your art.

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Jeannie Ann Clark 06 February 2008

This is love and very well expressed...thank you and keep writing..10.

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