Treading Water Comments

does love ever regain its fresh experience inside the history of the heart..its hard to love for the sake of love on its own merit..and not be subdued by loves old stings..still we try..we try...lovely poem tia..the problem of love nicely elucidated..

Love this beautiful poem with 10+

How honest this reads Tia - -and we have all been there sometimes - - treading water is a way of slowing down the inevitable outcome of things - both good and not so good.... you write this so well.....10/10 from Fay.xx

good stanzaic frame to gear up the theme..well written..10++

Your title is perfect, as is your piece. I wish you luck if this be autobiographical. Treading water as you so aptly put is is - simply horrible. But I would add, if treading, why not run to someone more deserving? You have encapsulated feelings to which many will relate. t x

LoL - No need for apology deerest :) You always brighten up ph with your witty commentary... We need that :)

Life is like that sometimes Tia, but you'll feel the firm shore beneath your feet again :) I'm sure 10 Andy

Tia, enjoyed your water theme. Well written.10/10 Ian