Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Treading Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inexorably, minutes tick by
And time seeps slowly past
Like the trickle through the crack in the dam
Hardly noticed until
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Valerie Lennox
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Makhosonke Dhlamini 17 January 2012

Wonderful piece of art, I enjoyed it

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Shanaaz Waldien 15 January 2012

A really beautiful poem! thank you for sharing.

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Dave Walker 21 December 2011

Really great poem. Liked it. A great write.

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Valerie Lennox

Valerie Lennox

Kampala, Uganda
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