Treacherous Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Treacherous

Rating: 5.0


The world is so treacherous,
life so unpredictable.
One may stop to think
whether Sun would rise tomorrow!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 27 December 2020

That was one half my comment. PH is getting ridiculous. Great poem. Great poet. Maybe this comment will get through

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Susan Williams 27 December 2020

We might end up blowing our planet to smithereens one way or another but God can stop our nonsense or let it stand. I like Rose-Marie's comment--poignant is the right word!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 December 2020

A deeply poignant poem. There are times we feel the same when we are at our lowest lows. A beautiful poem so well expressed. Liked the closure line. Five Stars! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 20 December 2020

Whether the sun would rise tomorrow, words filled with such sorrow! .. Days maybe treacherous, but we must keep in heart Hope for rays of guiding light for a world with peaceful tomorrows! .. May there be Hope! .. Very heart felt! .. Well expressed! .. Thank you for sharing! .. 5 Stars

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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