Monday, December 12, 2011

Travis Moonrise Comments

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Over barren trees
the tattered moon
ascends, barely clearing
dark hills
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Steven Federle
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Jake Deeds 13 December 2011

'like the lumbering C-5 rising through the gloom on bright thunderbolts to December's bleeding moon.' very nice line! I have seen them lumber myself in Little Rock and they do just as you say...<

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