Sunday, August 30, 2020

Travelling With Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Aboard a ship, I am travelling with Time,
Noiselessly and unannounced.
The route is crowded, on it
Events unfold rapidly to keep me engaged.
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Ravinder Kumar Soni
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Dr Antony Theodore 17 November 2020

Where would I sink in the vast emptiness that exists? I might not find that place beforehand. But I cannot jump from the ship either, Can I at the risk of losing me without a trace? very nice poem. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 August 2020

A well penned excellent poem. Simply laudable.....10++++

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Rajnish Manga 30 August 2020

A philosophical musing but it makes an interesting reading, nonetheless. We all are time travellers moving in a bubble of emptiness. It reminds me of an old convention that a captain of a sinking ship also went down with it. Thanks for sharing.I would like to quote: Time travellers like me have no destination They travel only to sink with their ship.

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