Monday, October 13, 2008

Travelling Light. Comments

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Bags filled with the past.
Hanging, heavy as lead,
At times lasting well
Into future years,
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Fay Slimm
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Robert Howard 18 December 2008

I love the association of 'heavy as lead' with 'into future years.' The last thing our futures need is lead poisoning.

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Tom Balch 23 October 2008

great piece Fay,10 from Tom..........Left Luggage! may help

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Wojja Fink 13 October 2008

It may appear hard but look, leaves fall from a tree, the effort is holding on effortless, they've gone!

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 October 2008

It's hard letting go of all that Baggage, it's just part of who you are... Andrew 10

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Fay Slimm

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