Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Traveller's Sorrow! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nostalgia fills up my senses
as I once again after years cross the bridge!

The nearby mountains seem to have been in the waiting
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Namratha Swamy
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Anil Kumar Panda 31 July 2018

'The nearby mountains seem to have been in the waiting The then gushing river seems to have lost her momentum The perennial bright and gay flowers seem listless And the once pregnant fields now look sleek and barren! '.. beautiful lines really that tell about the pain in your heart that comes when you miss someone. Very nice poem.10++++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 July 2018

Namratha, such a lovely poem...10+++

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Rajnish Manga 31 July 2018

It's like losing or missing something substantial out of a nostalgic scene. Amazingly portrayed. Thanks a lot.

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