Traveling With The Breath Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Ellie Rakita. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

An excellent composition of depth, and passion!

…I breathe in the fear of unknown…I breath out of love …I breathe in family hopes and expectations… A poet...write.with a dropp of fear

Breathing is like freedom, when it is suppressed then eventual death comes. Man is finite.... live to the fullest while time is abundant! A 10.