Thursday, November 12, 2015

Travel Towards Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

Traveled towards the heaven on a small tour,
Breeze was cool and visible,
The roads were clean,
Carried the water with fingures,
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VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM
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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2017

'Someone was playing drums'! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2015

Visible and cool breeze transfers message to have interesting journey towards heaven Nicely shared really...10

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Nice satire in your poem, I enjoyed it....10

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