Friday, December 7, 2007

Travel Haiku - Ramon Crater (Israel) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ramon Crater arrival
our overflowing sweat and beer
as we toast each other
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john tiong chunghoo
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Fred Babbin 07 December 2007

Very well done. But PoemHunter.com tells me I must have 20 characters.

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Ian Bowen 07 December 2007

John, thanks for the info. and the line 'our overflowing sweat and beer' Enjoyable piece. Ian

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