Saturday, October 4, 2008

Travel Haiku - Mono Lake Yosemite National Park (California) Comments

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Mono Lake
nature's knobby hands cast
a bleakness over me
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john tiong chunghoo
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Bob Blackwell 04 October 2008

John, your love for what you see came through very strongly in this poem, allowing me to also share. A well written work. Bob

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Alison Cassidy 04 October 2008

John, your explanation was interesting to read, but your poems told me all that I needed to know. You distill the essence of your subject and more importantly evoke with great clarity your emotional reaction. Superbly crafted work. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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