Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Travel Comments

Rating: 3.7

The little clock dings the night on the roof.
It hurries towerd the mystery of luck.
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Ron Padgett
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Joe Blow 22 November 2017

Unless I am simply unfamiliar with the word 'throught', there may be a typo in this poem.

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Susan Williams 06 July 2016

I am a bit sleepy-headed... I hope that is why I cannot make heads nor tails of this work. It's like I'm an inch short- I think I'm onto it and I reach out and it slips away as if I never had a glimpse of its truth. I shall have to try again when my two brain cells are awake... But I don't feel too bad, I see that I have company with Tom below!

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Tom Billsborough 06 July 2016

Not too impressed. Tom Billsborough

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 July 2016

I don't know where these things are hidden! Nice work.

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Ron Padgett

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