Thursday, April 9, 2009

Trauma. Comments

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Has This World Of Ours Become So Desperate To Destroy Us?

In All Our Triumph We Still Have Defeat,
We Have Our Own Decisions To Make.
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Samlayy Broussard
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Alexis Delancey 09 April 2009

'In This Pursuit We Sew Our Hearts With Needles, Mending Broken Pieces And Scars. While You Stitch Each Broken Piece, Your Mind Fills With Trauma. Wanting To Be Released, But You Hold It In So Tightly To Your Chest.' I like this part especially. The whole poem itself really intrigues me, as if the demon is a literal and metaphorical part of us all. Well-written. Keep writing. =)

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