Sunday, November 26, 2006

Trapped Life Comments

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Never to be lovers again.
I must grieve.
From this life,
I shall leave.
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Joshua Fegley
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Nathan Strange 06 December 2006

Yeah good write, anyone who has been dumped could relate to this.

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Asma Bahrainwala 27 November 2006

nice write, Joshua... Asma...

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Brian Dorn 26 November 2006

Dark and melancholic but certainly heartfelt. Great write, Joshua. Brian

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