Wednesday, June 28, 2006

Trapped In Paper Plate Land Comments

Rating: 5.0

FINGERS shake,
light bulbs break,
tears are fake,
trapped in paper plate land.
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Meghan - 06 November 2006

I love this poem. Really creative. Haven't really figured out what it's about but that's alright. Awesome poem. Meghan

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Nimal Dunuhinga 28 June 2006

A very rare humourous poem David. I really enjoyed.

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Kihindei Adai 28 June 2006

David, you always seem to save my sensibilities.......captivating....thank you for allowing me to peek in to your world.

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only one thing more frightening that i can think of...paper cup land...much too small...GOOD DREAMIN IMMAGINATION, DAVID...MY-T-FYNE''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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