Monday, May 12, 2008

Trapped In A Spider's Web Comments

Rating: 4.9

He stepped
on his guilt

it
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Dónall Dempsey
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Scarlett Treat 14 May 2008

So, how much better it is, then, to write out your venom for someone, nastying up the pure white page....than to stab him or her in the heart! Well done, my friend, in a harmless way! !

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Onelia Avelar 12 May 2008

You may do not like this individual, but in the poem it still seems charming, smiling, not bad enough :) - a weak human being, caught in a dark spider`s web. Very well penned - you lack true spitefulness to hate this individual, I guess. Correct me, if wrong.

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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