Trapped In A Bottle Comments

A tragic story just because of someone's foolishness.

Drink driving or drunk driving is mad. A good account in this powerful piece of the tragedy that continues in many places around the world. Sad but true.

Great choice of title, yes the bottle is a wall that takes away not only the vision but preciuos lives! You write masterful. The lines after the kamikaze yelling are hard strong and painful, read with anger fast with not time to take a breath, than comes surrender to the river accept your fate, that wow! Makes the flesh relax instantly. Good poem, thank you for share!

Very powerful and heartfelt write - drinking and driving don't go together, and too many lives are lost because of it.