Sunday, April 9, 2006

Trapped By Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

A challenge followed by invitation leads to a trap
Carefully prepared by a cunning wolf disguised as a rabbit
But who is the predator and who is the prey…
Some things are not always what they seem, and someone’s in for a surprise
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Jack Dylan
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Patricia Gale 29 August 2006

Wow is all I can say.................

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Catlin Crawford 17 July 2006

MMmmm... very nicely done... it gets the juices flowing; -)

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Sydney Daniels 10 April 2006

Oh Jack! I couldn't have said it better myself.

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***** ********* 10 April 2006

Well Jack if the above is a trap, it is surely a guilded one! lol Tell me this is a poem about spring bursting forth? Winking at you with a well earned 10 from smiling this morning, thanking you for the ride! lol Tai

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William Jackson 09 April 2006

Excellent poem. The heart desires what the heart desires wisdom not withstanding. King Solomon loved excess, and I will love mine the same.

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