Monday, February 9, 2009

Trapped And Shattered Comments

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Locked in the madness of confusion and darkness
I strain my eyes
Looking for the slightest shade of light
As my heart crys
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I love shattered just wow......great job =)

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 February 2009

I have to tell you Gracie, that the last verse is a masterpiece. I don't think I have ever read a more perfect description of a SHATTERED love. And you made it have flow and rhyme as well. Just wonderful! GW62

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Dislocated Heart 09 February 2009

wow... powerful poem..... I like it tho....

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