Saturday, June 20, 2009

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Unknown, lost in a world that I can't


understand.
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Jamal Brown
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i liekd this this was interestin

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i love this poem its like a lot of mine but i like yors better please keep wrighting No Reason To Care

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Angelic Warrior 08 July 2009

i'd say this is probably your best poem i've read :) ......believe me your not alone.....i think being 16 and being treated that way is better than being 19 and being treated that way.....eventually they'll realize that your not a little kid anymore......very nice write!

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Sandy Vanity 08 July 2009

it used to be like that for me all the time even now some times and it sux i know it dose my real dad still treats me like im 10 cuz he dosnt know my age nore dose he know me at all. but yeah i like this poem i relate to it.

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Jamal Brown

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Lexigton, S.C.
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