Thursday, August 3, 2006

Trapped Comments

Rating: 3.7

I’m trapped,
Somewhere between life and death,
In a world of pain and hurt,
Betrayal got me here,
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The Black Rose
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This is a good poem with a great ending.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 11 September 2006

Left to bleed and then Nursed to life Between your Love and my loss awesome lines great write write more i like your way of doing things. Lylyanna

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Abigail Keller 13 August 2006

Twas a very goodwrite. I'm glad this poem was not trapped in the confines of your mind... look forward to seeing more. ~Amber~

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***** ********* 03 August 2006

You never think it will happen to you, do you Black Rose? A thorough briefing at what being trapped by love really does mean, my only consolation, is it applies both ways. Thanks for sharing my own thoughts so well. I hate men, but only today, Tai

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