Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Trapped Comments

Rating: 3.8

My body is numb all I can feel is my heart,

The thoughts in my head are sour and tart.
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Tiffany Baldwin
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Owain Glyn 17 December 2012

This description of pain does you credit. Writing is very cathartic, but I guess you know that by now.

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Nikhil Sharma 14 December 2012

thats your best out of 3

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 13 December 2012

well written& the emotions expressed with words of pain............float, fly like eagle, above this mortal pain, through pen..... keep writing.....

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Tiffany Baldwin

Tiffany Baldwin

Arlington Heights, IL
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