Tuesday, February 21, 2006

Trapped Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling trapped within these walls
as I stumble with each fall.
I try to hold my head up high
so no-one ever sees me cry.
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Rene Bennett
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Gina Onyemaechi 21 February 2006

Ouch, Rene! This piece of writing hurts! ! ! I didn't think I was going to come out the other end! No light at the end of the tunnel, this poem rings loud and clear! Take a bloomin 10, Rene and let me go! ! Suffocatingly, Gina. PS: -)

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Rene Bennett

Rene Bennett

Los Angelos, California
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