Saturday, June 30, 2012

Trapped Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trapped in the fog
cant find my way
I scream, I cry in vain
fog thickens like cloud
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Madhavi Grace
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Susan Williams 18 January 2021

read this poem again today and my heart opened up to the distress in it--powerful write--powerful experience to read and contemplate--the desperation and the faith in every line --a journey through a trial of faith--5 stars

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Susan Williams 06 October 2020

fog thickens like cloud about to rain, - - - - - - - - - - - -good image choice

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Wahab Abdul 30 June 2012

excellent, the ending is exquisite

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