Saturday, June 30, 2012

Trapped Comments

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Trapped in a secret room with no doors
Nothing but a single open window that I dare not go through
I see you on the other side and know that is where I belong
But I know my every move is being recorded by the watchful eyes of all
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Arielle D'amore
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Emily Krueger 01 July 2012

I absolutely love this poem! You writing is exquisite. I love the part, The ever burning flames I'm cursed with The flames that I set upon myself when I promised you forever And although you promised me too, your words were empty and cold So you have your freedom You're an excellent writer and i can't wait to read more! :)

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Ashley Dowdy 30 June 2012

I love this poem. Very well crafted. =)

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