! Trapped ! Comments

shouldnt have opened that door linda...heres a bad bad guy...happens to the best of us very nice lines the beauty lies in the simplicity and the flow a paradox of privacy and desire to rove... great cheers

hey I liked the paradox here... 'Outside the world is scary beautiful'.... but some times i feel it is all bitterness and pain../ nice poetic expressions.liked it..10+++ regards shan

May we all be glad that your talent is not trapped, as it continually flows freely through the door left ajar. As always – wonderful in every way!

Lovely poem Linda, pushing the boundaries everyday, takes courage.

beautyful poem i like this one. its touching and inspiring about the self.

Decisions, decisions, decisions... This is a personal and finely crafted inquiry into new beginnings and the courage that must be gathered in order to confront change. You're right. It's 'easier' to stay put and ride the familiar turntable and yet the prospect of a new direction must always beckon tantalizingly. This is a deeply personal poem, with a theme that all of us near retirement must relate to with mixed feelings. Your poetry has bright eyes Linda. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Very truly written.Lovely poem

.....................excellent Linda, but it's to be expected. Much love, Jerry

'Let me push that boundary just a little, Fresh and sweet the air - Through that open door.' Witty composition with nice ending,10+

Indeed enlarging small point to a big circle will give you a better space to breathe!

Linda, I know that feeling oh so very well. At some point we have to take a chance. However, most of us are too afraid to leave the safety of which we have been accustomed to. Great insight written here. Top marks and thank you for sharing it my friend. Hugs David