Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Trap By Devil Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trap of devil is well laid,
weak mind often fails,
we in our human form
keep this fighting spirit on
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2015

With a hope faith and trust everything happens with imagination or reality. Thoughtful and wise poem shared here...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2015

The traps of life! But, with hope to move on and be safe. Nice work.

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Mannah Shekh 03 November 2015

Very soul touching them... Love the poem nehal ji... Special thanks for the poem.. Allah tayala ne ham sab ko rakkhsa kariye..

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Sanjukta Nag 03 November 2015

Trap of the devil is everywhere to swallow the innocence of mind. A very symbolic poem with various deep imagery. Top marks.

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Loke Kok Yee 03 November 2015

like Adam and Eve eating the apple thanks Asim-10

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Ari Alsio 03 November 2015

Trap of devil is well laid, ...Now then also been caught, thank you.10

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M Asim Nehal 30 November 2015

Thanks much Mr.Ari Alsio

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