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Availing itself dangling, is the bait
Trap-walls, whilst ensemble to entrap
Trapdoor is counting down to fall
Reading impulses trigger waits for
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 29 August 2016

Thanks for the comment. Yes, I shall read it and come back.

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Sasanka Sekhar Panda 29 August 2016

Crazy mindset is trapped in its own follies. Excellent Mr. Liyanage. Please read my recent poem The Ultimate.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2016

Allured! ! With the pleasures of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you Edward for reading mine.

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Kelly Kurt 28 August 2016

Human nature often victimizes itself

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Exactly, Kelly. Thank you for the comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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