Thursday, January 31, 2008
Transparent Waters Comments
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Begin thoughts scrub the surface,
Remove rust, wash the sable spots
Of eyes, of heart and of dark mind;
But the diabolic coat a layer upon a layer,
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Mary Gordley
31 January 2008
Muhammad, your reveal some worthy thoughts in this poem. I am in agreement with the sentiments expressed and those last two lines conclude it well.
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8/25/2025 5:27:07 PM # 1.0.0
yes indeed a great work by a great poet. there r some who''remove rust, wash the sable spots''. i wish to see such work 4m ur side. truly uzma.