Friday, August 10, 2012

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these thoughts tear me apart and consume me
the skin i pretended was thick
is really transparent
and naked I sit
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Aria Siren
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Alla Simone 15 September 2012

fav. line: and all along you've seen right through me. Such a defeated, vulnerable feeling that seems to creep up on you at the worst times and often adds insult to injury. Short and powerful.

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Tiger Lily Love 20 August 2012

Sometimes its the shortest poems that are the sweetest or in this case, the deepest, and that stay with you the longest. Very chilling and inspired write.

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