Thursday, November 27, 2008

Translucent Fairytale Comments

Rating: 5.0

Suspended above a riveting scene
Fathoming lovely things otherwise unseen
Eyes trailing over countless dewy mounds of green
As the blue of sky reflects serenity
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Josephine J.W
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Emily Oldham 10 May 2009

beautiful poem. flowing and full of imagery. thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Fiona Davidson 07 December 2008

This makes me think of the lady of shalot drifting away down the river...beautiful...thank you

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Min Sia 27 November 2008

So deep..and I admit..I still had that kind of dreaming... Words very well selected.. Great poem!

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Josephine J.W

Josephine J.W

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