Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Translucence Comments

Rating: 2.8

The waves break like signs
Rise and fall,
Crash into spraying light,
Bright, tight, hold,
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Jay Alexander
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2013

Indeed i agree with yor poem n your footnote. We hav to respect d sea. How u rhyme n personify is awesome here. I do so hope u review my latest too.

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Ebi Robert 13 December 2013

I like the style of writing

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