Sunday, July 17, 2005

Transitory Comments

Rating: 3.5

They said that she was old,
her puckered lips reminded
of the sphincter muscle,
all velvety, pursestring, and pale.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Linda Preston 18 July 2005

This is very good Herbert. Some great poetic techniques too!

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Allan James Saywell 17 July 2005

this is very good Herbert what a wonderfull explanation for our existance on this God forsaken planet it would please me to be an atom just hanging around with all the other atoms not having to share and break bread with people who maim and kill Warm regards allan

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