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Tadpole is piscine in appearance,
breathes by gills, tailed,
herbivorous,
very actively swimming,
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A wonderful poem of great insight. A brilliant comparison as regards changes in some insects and animals and in humans. Your perceptions and analysis are worth to ponder about.
Nature has many wonders.Life, small or big, is always in the process of change.We applaud when something bad changes into good.It is really a concern when human beings shed humanism and transform into entities of different factionalism.A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.and
I accept heartily all criticism and use them for making corrections in following poems.Remain thankful for those constructive critical views.
4) Sure, readers have their own interpretations, but this is just a bit too much for me, all described correctly, thanks for the brilliant presentation and the good formulas, but this poem contains too many Transitions for me best regards from Sylvia Frances Chan
Revered Ma'am, you are fully correct to point out too many transitions.I accept your comment heartily as I shall use to refine my further poems.
3) I am really sorry, (I am more a critic than an average reader) but because of too many comparisons and all the beauty in nature, I can no longer know what you really mean.
Out of many, I have picked up few transitions which reflect some morphological and behavioural ones.My aim is to emphasize that there being no metamorphosis, how come so many changes occur in human baby, from innocency to so many complications we find in .s.
2) a Dutch saying: you can no longer see the forest for the trees, it must be a beautiful poem, and though the Title says it all, but this poem has too many Transitions for me,
1) I can't finish it sit behind such factionalism and vandalism, your end of the poem, of course you can't finish it, because you go from one to the other, and you keep rattling on,
I, very often, keep on pondering about the forces behind changes in human adults.Body fluids and societal influence, more so society.But I can not talk it out as I am unable to wear my heart on my sleeve.But I shall use your critical views to better and refine my future poems.Thanks a lot.
Very discerning write. Brilliant and vivid comparisons on transitions. Top Marks! ! ?
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7/20/2025 4:51:44 PM # 1.0.0
A wonderful poem on flora and fauna! In