Thursday, August 20, 2015

Transition Comments

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Outstretched bed, appearance of moon
Summer breeze, perfection of release
a mere transition, water to vapor
in deep breath all was left
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Luz H.
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2019

Magnetic force! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Luz Hanaii 05 December 2019

Edward, I thank you for reading and commenting.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 August 2018

the only thing that matters now is love traveling upward towards magnetic force when we are young we live in doubts and like to philosophize sometimes in the wrong way....... but as we grow we fall in line changing our philosophy of life and look for the eternal light...... very nice poem.. tony

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Luz Hanaii 20 August 2018

Thank you for your nice comment.

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