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Part - 2 vegetation fell head long./ Wreaking havoc, the rain poured down. How Nature becomes calm is also nicely penned as...Then everything was quiet and still. / Like a child gone to sleep, / after throwing violent tantrums / unrelenting, / The sky over head, in her cerulean night gown fell asleep, A marvelous poem really. Thanks for sharing.

Part - 1 The violent rage of Nature has been so touchingly and incisively delineated by you. I want to cite some lines here.....The sky, suddenly into a violent rage, flew. / Dark mass of clouds, driven by the wind / /went scurrying from West to East./ A dark shroud, across the sky / from end to end was spread.....Trees crashed down and

Rains can cam down all the fires, Then everything was quiet and still. Like a child gone to sleep, amazing lines.

detailed description of nature in an angry state. Nice poem descriptive poem.

nice description of furious summer rain.......great poem..

The display of great contrast suitably justifies an interesting title. Exciting. Enjoyed the unfolding therein.

thanks Valsa, for sharing this poem with me... it is beautiful i love these lines -The sky over head, in her cerulean night gown fell asleep, attended by her twinkling handmaids!

Excellent diction and scintillating poetic charm! Good poetry is safe in your hands.

Powerful description of the destruction and intensity of a monsoon type storm, and its calm and tranquil aftermath. Exceptionally well written.

Wonderful poetry, very descriptive - grea read, felt as if I was there with the experience.

Transition. Now I got the title. Good to read.

from havoc to peace and tranquility beautifully written

transition of words to show two different situations! at last the peace prevails! Nice to read!